Sunday 31 August 2008

Pan

Ovine has evolved into this:

Pan

We saw a sheep, it's proselytizing 

eyes like jeweled eggs

fingering our gaze.

 

Until now.

Now that we recall and forget,

in a simulcast of memory.

 

And for what?

Your soulless weaseling

has alerted this unsteady

tummocking:

 

a tripping from toe to hoof

the cloven trip-trap

of the merely

ovine.

 

You forgot.

But I recall, alone,

what it is to stare

into the abyss

of the barely

human.


it will shortly be sent to the National Poetry Society's competition along with another two I just rattled off.


Endure!

'Ovine' is the best poem ever written

on this computer in the last minute or so.

However, I'm rewriting 'Ovine' as less obviously made up on the spur of the moment, and I'll send it off to some lumpen Poetry mag or comp.

Ovine
We saw a sheep, it's proselytizing 
eyes like jeweled fibres
fingering our gaze.

Until.
Now we recall and forget,
a simulcast of memory.

Your soulless weaseling
has alerted the unsteady
tummocking, of the merely
ovine.



Saturday 30 August 2008

Most poetry is doggerel

Mine is no exception.

Here's my offering. Let's call it: 
Ovine
We saw a sheep, it's proselytizing eyes
like jeweled fibre fingers, meeting
our gaze. 

Until. 

Until now. We recall
and forget. Your weaseling soul
has alerted the unsteady
tummocking 
of the ovine.

That took less time to think up than it took to write.